Further the dialogue by providing more information and clarification. Provide feedback on whether you agree or disagree with their criticism. Explain why.

I understand your criticism and appreciate you taking the time to provide it. I agree that some of the sections are outdated, however, I believe this is because the book was written a few years ago and much has changed since then. While we can’t update every part of it, we can certainly make sure to include updated information on our website or in other materials associated with it. As far as diagrams or charts go, I think adding them would be helpful but also understand if there isn’t enough room in the book for more visuals. Overall though, I think the book does a good job at providing an overview of the topic and feel that most people will be able to easily follow along even without additional visuals.