How has your letter changed from your draft to the current version? What advice did you receive from your peers?

After revising my cover letter according to the feedback, I can say that it has drastically changed from my draft. My peers advised me to include more information about my past experiences and accomplishments, as well as a more detailed closing section. From this revision, I am most pleased about the added detail in the body of my letter that explains how I am a good fit for the position. Additionally, I am pleased with the professionalism displayed in this version of my cover letter.

If I had more time to work on this cover letter, I would add a section that highlights one or two of my major accomplishments while working in past positions or internships. With additional time and effort, this addition would make the content of my cover letter even stronger and more impressive to potential employers.

I feel confident in both the professionalism and authenticity displayed in this version of my cover letter. As it stands now, it is concise yet full of important details that explain why I am qualified for the job opportunity at hand. Furthermore, all details included are honest reflections on myself which displays authenticity within an application setting.